Monday, September 13, 2010

Assignment 1: Super Power

The superpower that i would choose would be seldom thought of but very useful. the power i would choose would definitely be speed reading i choose it for it is very useful. The reason why i would choose that over others is simply the fact that it is more entertaining for as long as there is something to be read i can read it. It may seem dull compared to flying or strength but in a book you can fly if your imagination can keep up. Oh the places that you'll see oh the places you'll go in a book its all possible in real life if you were to fly you would be seen as something of a freak and people would want to bring you in for testing to see how you do it. Thats why speed reading is great and thats why its mine.

2 comments:

  1. Captivating introduction. Could improve punctuation.

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  2. Good start, Nolan, but it has a ways to go. Needs lots of proofreading. Focus on diction and creative imagery. Consider some similes and metaphors.

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